Wednesday, June 29, 2005

 

Flow

by Marie Delgado Travis

Blood
flows, flows
through the street,
into the air,
across the river,
over the meadow.
It flows
on the balcony,
under the door,
down the corridor,
between the sheets,
against the wall,
detonating in
our hands.

Comments:
good poem.But what is the thing the poem is trying to convey?

Why there are no comments?
 
I appreciate your question, Swordfish, because it goes to the essence of poetry. As the writer, the poem obviously has a meaning for me, but ideally (if it is a good poem), a meaningful message for the reader, as well.

The reader's interpretation could actually be different from mine and that, too, would be valid, because once written, the words sometimes take on a life of their own and good poems can be read at different levels.

I've been told that if I give away too much, I might "spoil" it for the reader and / or academic, who likes to belive that he or she has discovered the key. So I'll leave you to interpret my work. You sound like a very intelligent young man! Good luck in all things!

Blessings,
Marie Delgado Travis
 
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